The River and her Valley

October 19, 2012
By See.As.Eye.See BRONZE, Ivor, Virginia
See.As.Eye.See BRONZE, Ivor, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Time is nothing but an allusion which ages us" ~Alexa Truitt


The river runs smoothly and swiftly through the meandering valley,
The valley holds the river as tightly as he can,
Hoping that she will never leave.
But, occasionally the river loses her temper, and goes raging,
Not caring one ounce for the eroding valley's edges.
Days are born and days die,
For the everlasting companionship time flies.
The sun becomes his hottest, and clouds decide to arrive less frequently.
The river soon transforms into a slow moving stream.
The sun, moon, and all the hopeless animals watch,
As the relationship between the river and her one true valley rots.
More or less, More or less,
The water has disappeared leading to the rivers death,
And alone sits the valley, awaiting his river to take another breath.



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on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:59 am
See.As.Eye.See BRONZE, Ivor, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Time is nothing but an allusion which ages us" ~Alexa Truitt

THANK YOU! :) :)

on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:59 am
See.As.Eye.See BRONZE, Ivor, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Time is nothing but an allusion which ages us" ~Alexa Truitt

Thank you so very much :)

on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:53 am
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
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beautiful. It's very beautiful. I just absolutely love it.

on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:52 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

That was one refreshing and breath taking poem!! Loved the way you compared and you described it.! A beautiful piece!!!!

on Oct. 25 2012 at 7:34 pm
See.As.Eye.See BRONZE, Ivor, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Time is nothing but an allusion which ages us" ~Alexa Truitt

Thank you sooooo much!!!! Share please! :) This is My first published peice ever

on Oct. 25 2012 at 6:41 pm
Llyxomisacutie SILVER, Gilbert, Arizona
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"A steaming cup of Hot cocoa can make just about any day a little sweeter~"

How beautiful, I love the way you personaified the river and her lover the valley. I was thoroughly impressed by your style of poetry and want offer some helpful advice: KEEPING WRITING! XD


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