Dark Betrayal

October 18, 2012
By Anonymous

Around, all around, the angels gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It mutilates me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In agony I beg forgiveness
while the Reaper laughs cruelly.
Now alone, my cry of mercy falls upon uncaring eyes.

This is your love


The author's comments:
I am kinda depressed and it shows thru my work. Please let me know what u think in comments, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

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KrisNoe GOLD said...
on Dec. 5 2012 at 10:05 am
KrisNoe GOLD, Mayfield, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
Don't pay no mind to the demons. They fill you with fear.
- Phillip Phillips

i agree but it is dark do u hate love or are you scared of it

Hannabug GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 6:58 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

Hey this is really good!!!


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