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Angel Cloak

October 18, 2012
By Diffuse SILVER, Bhaktapur, Other
Diffuse SILVER, Bhaktapur, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is an untamed force. When we try to control it, it destroys us. When we try to imprison it, it enslaves us. When we try to understand it, it leaves us feeling lost and confused." -The Zahir


It's all that I've left
walking the path that
for me has been paved
walking with none
but angels alongside
their unwavering glow
illuminating my unmade path;
their Hands
tipping that sweet nectar
somewhere deep, deep, down me.



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on May. 31 2014 at 9:57 pm
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

I was casually strolling down TI when I came upon this, and you're from Nepal too. which caught my attention. I like the length of the poem, and the density too.  Great job!