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“What would you do for me?”
“I would

Walk through fire,

Touch a blade,

Drink poison,

Die a slave.
What would you do for me?”
“I would

Kiss you first,

Make it last,

Back away slowly,

And then run away fast.”
“If my

Last wish was for

One last kiss,

But stay with me forever,

Would you mutter ‘never’?”
“I would

Scream it to the world,

Make ‘never’ known,

Tear away from you,

And die my own.”



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DreamingOfNirvana said...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 6:42 pm
This is awesome! Deep and touching, great job
 
so_joy replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 11:39 am
Thank you!
 
JPanda13 said...
Feb. 16, 2013 at 11:01 pm
ooommmmggg i cant even express my amazement
 
so_joy replied...
Feb. 20, 2013 at 9:29 am
Thank you so much!
 
The_Open_Heart said...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 6:17 pm
This poem is sooo good. It would be an amazing song. Very deep, well done :)
 
so_joy replied...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 7:01 pm
Thank you!!
 
kmeep said...
Feb. 1, 2013 at 7:39 am
I love the rhythm of this poem! All your poems and your story are very good. Keep up the good work!
 
so_joy replied...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 7:02 pm
Thank you!
 
Twilightgirl97 said...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 11:58 pm
Another beautiful poem from the amazing so_joy :)
 
so_joy replied...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 7:00 pm
Thank you so much! :)
 
In_Love_with_Writing said...
Dec. 27, 2012 at 11:33 am
Extremely phenomenal!!!
 
so_joy replied...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 5:24 pm
Thank you!!
 
Oneself said...
Dec. 14, 2012 at 8:25 pm
This is so beautiful. Its perfect with the picture. Great job! also, thank you for commenting on my poem.
 
so_joy replied...
Dec. 17, 2012 at 12:47 pm
Thank you so much!
 
Shadowpomgurl said...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 1:49 pm
my first thought was.. HEARTFELT! 5/5!
 
so_joy replied...
Dec. 13, 2012 at 9:24 am
Thank you!
 
AlexanderQ said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 9:42 pm
I loved the rhythm, flow, speed, and rhyming of this poem! I love the romantical story of the poem as well.
 
so_joy replied...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 9:54 am
Thank you!
 
WhittyKittyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 1:45 pm
Definitely a five star poem.
 
so_joy replied...
Dec. 2, 2012 at 3:01 pm
Thank you!!
 
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