What Would You Do For Me?

October 16, 2012
By so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."


“What would you do for me?”
“I would

Walk through fire,

Touch a blade,

Drink poison,

Die a slave.
What would you do for me?”
“I would

Kiss you first,

Make it last,

Back away slowly,

And then run away fast.”
“If my

Last wish was for

One last kiss,

But stay with me forever,

Would you mutter ‘never’?”
“I would

Scream it to the world,

Make ‘never’ known,

Tear away from you,

And die my own.”



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so_joy SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2013 at 11:39 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!

on Jun. 12 2013 at 6:42 pm
WinterGreer SILVER, Wasilla, Alaska
7 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
dance like no one's watching/ love like you've never been hurt/ sing like no one's listening/ live like heaven is on earth

This is awesome! Deep and touching, great job

so_joy SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2013 at 9:29 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you so much!

JPanda13 GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2013 at 11:01 pm
JPanda13 GOLD, Roswell, New Mexico
10 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
just cuz you put syrup on somin dont make it pancakes
Whoever said sticks and stones may break my bones but words can never hurt me, had never been hit with a dictionary

ooommmmggg i cant even express my amazement

so_joy SILVER said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 7:02 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 7:01 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 7:00 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you so much! :)

on Feb. 4 2013 at 6:17 pm
The_Open_Heart GOLD, Lincoln, Nebraska
14 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some people come into your life for a reason, a season, or a lifetime."

This poem is sooo good. It would be an amazing song. Very deep, well done :)

kmeep GOLD said...
on Feb. 1 2013 at 7:39 am
kmeep GOLD, Woodbury, New Jersey
17 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can't laugh at yourself, laugh at other people.
-Tim Hawkins

I love the rhythm of this poem! All your poems and your story are very good. Keep up the good work!

on Jan. 29 2013 at 11:58 pm
Twilightgirl97 BRONZE, Bellefonte, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Psalm 63:3 Because your steadfast love is better than life, my lips will praise you.

Another beautiful poem from the amazing so_joy :)

so_joy SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2013 at 5:24 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!!

on Dec. 27 2012 at 11:33 am
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 389 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

Extremely phenomenal!!!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 17 2012 at 12:47 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you so much!

Oneself BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2012 at 8:25 pm
Oneself BRONZE, Maitland, Florida
4 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your life is based on your choices, not your abilities.

This is so beautiful. Its perfect with the picture. Great job! also, thank you for commenting on my poem.

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2012 at 9:24 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!

on Dec. 12 2012 at 1:49 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
22 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

my first thought was.. HEARTFELT! 5/5!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2012 at 9:54 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!

on Dec. 7 2012 at 9:42 pm
AlexanderQ GOLD, Oak Creek, Colorado
12 articles 0 photos 37 comments
I loved the rhythm, flow, speed, and rhyming of this poem! I love the romantical story of the poem as well.

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 2 2012 at 3:01 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!!

AvaJay GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2012 at 1:45 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
13 articles 4 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.
~ Tagore

Definitely a five star poem.


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