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A speaker of mind
A lover from heart
In the corner of silence
I was burned from the start.

Does it matter?
Can you see?
How much of a burden its become to me?

On a day so bright,
The blinding white light,
I knew at that moment it was love at first sight.


But my friend you are
and the love turned sour,
I knew that you didn't love me,
Not even in my final hour.




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WR1T3R said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 12:33 am:
 Wow! I loved it! Reaches those who have experienced anything like it. Very well done. The rhyming not only sounds amazing, but it makes sense. Great Job :) Please read, rate, and comment on my poems if you have the time. Thanks :)
 
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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 9:44 am:
Wow! Incredible work! You are an AMAZING poet! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot :) Thanks!
 
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bulby545 said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:58 pm:
i liked it but its sad very power ful
 
FallenDreamerGurl replied...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 4:54 pm :
Thanks, i was feeling pretty broke up about my friend not liking me, i knew him since primary, were in high school now. we've always been close. then the whole 'final hour part' was inspired by my friend, she's depressed and the love she finds never... sticks?. And i just couldn't bare the thought of losing her. shes more than a friend to me, she's like my own blood sister. Forever <3 :)
 
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