She's everything you could ever ask for in a person; smart, beautiful, amazing...but she has a dirty little secret.........she stole my heart ya see we were talking one day, right? Looking at me with those beautiful brown, bottomless eyes of hers. The ones I could look into forever and still not be content. And the next thing I know it's gone, right out from underneath my nose. Gone. Then she ran away, with her prize. I still haven't seen it or her since.
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Simply worded, easy to relate to, and a clear voice and tone. Good job.
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