Dirty secret

October 11, 2012
By Wordartist SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
Wordartist SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree it will live its whole thinking its stupid." -Albert Einstein


She's everything you could ever ask for in a person; smart, beautiful, amazing...but she has a dirty little secret.........she stole my heart ya see we were talking one day, right? Looking at me with those beautiful brown, bottomless eyes of hers. The ones I could look into forever and still not be content. And the next thing I know it's gone, right out from underneath my nose. Gone. Then she ran away, with her prize. I still haven't seen it or her since.


The author's comments:
I had these words stuck in my head so here there are written down or typed down I suppose you could say.

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on Mar. 6 2013 at 5:06 pm
Wordartist SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree it will live its whole thinking its stupid." -Albert Einstein

Thank you! I really appreciate you commenting so many people don't and I was really hoping that I would get a lot of feedback so I can be a better writer.

on Oct. 13 2012 at 8:22 pm
Emily_Greene GOLD, Spring Valley, California
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Simply worded, easy to relate to, and a clear voice and tone. Good job.




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