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The punch is done
The pain sets in
The war is won
The mind is lost
Loved ones returned
But the dead ones burned
The pain will settle
But the hurt will remain

The heart torn
But the land reborn
Anger now faded
From places once raided
The war may be done
But the fight is not won
The mind crippled
The pain tripled
We all fight the war
For we are the WAR



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Sbooboo said...
Feb. 7, 2013 at 3:09 pm:
I love you even though i feel you though your poems i love when u write them. It touches my heart in so many places you wouldnt belivie 
 
FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 19, 2013 at 2:52 pm :
I think you nailed it good work, i like how its short sweet but rrue
 
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allhallowsevekatieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 5:14 pm:
i loved it it is very  good and correct... i have family members that served.....
 
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pitt98 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 6:47 pm:
I like this poem. It's sort of sad and kind of melancholy. Good Job
 
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HannabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 10:11 pm:
Amazingness!!!!
 
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L7SquariaN This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:59 am:
Oh, wow. This one is amazing. 5/5
 
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smileykin234 said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:57 pm:
Woah! This one Rocks! I cant wait to read more!
 
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