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The sun shining bright
But a day with no light
Darker then day
But brighter than night
I was as free as a bird
That has just taken flight
The sky was glowing
And the wind blowing

With stars in the sky
As I rise to the sky
I wake and I fall
I roll like a ball
Sad to be wakened
From my dream that had taken
Me to new heights
If only it were real
But alas it is fate to be parted
From the dream of soaring
The dream of DREAMING




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allhallowsevekatieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 5:12 pm:
beautiful really but a little repetitive.... you should work on that in your next poem
 
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PurpleOreoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 5:26 pm:
Well 1st of the picture caught my attetion, so good pick on the picure. And your poem flows really nicely, like the rhyming in there as well. And as a whole with the picture its really, really nice. Well done...write more!
 
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HannabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 10:12 pm:
Very interesting poem :D
 
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L7SquariaNThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:57 am:
Very mysterious and surreal, as actual dreams are. Great portrayal. Excellent work.
 
bulby545This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:59 am :
thank you
 
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bulby545This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:40 am:
thank you
 
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Fortunes-Hidden-From-A-Jade-DragonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:38 am:
When I read this poem I felt like a Bird being set free. I like the way you organized this poem. Great work keep it up!! I wish yo all the bst on you endevors.
 
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ShadowpomgurlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 5:12 pm:
yeah, very nice  and CATCHY!!!
 
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smileykin234This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:56 pm:
Really Neat !
 
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