Beautiful Heart, Priceless Soul

October 6, 2012
By LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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Gold strands of hair
Tumble down her shoulders
Deep, dark, blue pools of light
Serve as her enchanting eyes.
So beautiful she blinds
As she emits her illuminating light.

So strong inside
Ready to fight
She has her hand on the hilt
Ready to pull out her dagger
She been through so much
But yet she’s standing here, so tough.

She smiles on the outside
To show she’s okay
But she’s really crying on the inside
Feels like she’s filled with hate.
She fights to find her way
Unable to see her enchanting rays.

She avoids the mirror’s reflection
Directs her vision in the opposite direction
Hates the person she sees
Wishes she could be what she can’t see
So she looks away and doesn’t dare pity
When she can’t see how blessed she is, with being so pretty.

She doesn’t truly see her full potential
Tells herself that she’s not reaching the essentials
She questions herself and her decisions
Acting upon, using careful precision
Makes sure she’s heading in the correct direction
But thats what makes her carved out of perfection

Beautiful heart, priceless soul.

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on Oct. 31 2012 at 12:05 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Allie I love it! I love the way it flows and so many people can relate to it. :D 5/5

TrishBell said...
on Oct. 15 2012 at 12:29 pm
TrishBell, Eaton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
If you love someone let them go, if they come back they always loved you if they dont, they never loved you enough.

the peom hits close to home because it makes me think of everyone who has been rejected even if they are truly beautiful at heart.

on Oct. 15 2012 at 12:20 pm
ShadowOfDarkness PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Coute que coute(Cost What It May) kinda jealous..the prose, the writing style...lovely


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