Golden Commitment

October 4, 2012
By Girchick96 SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
Girchick96 SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
You can complain that roses have thorns or rejoice that thorns have roses.

I feel so alive yet I can't breathe.
Then reply, then hope, then relief.
You are so good to me.
So far but close in spirit.
No love for image
But love for who you are.
My heart continues to beat
I can't wait to see who you will be.
Entwine with me forever.
Then walk, then promise, then lover.

The author's comments:
Funny thing about this poem is that a song inspired me called "Golden" by Michele Chrisette. I thought about how
I want my marriage to start, with a good wedding of course. I love my boyfriend very much and I can see him being in my future so in a way he has inspired me as well.

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