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A Subway

October 5, 2012
By mikaela1107 GOLD, Castle Rock, Colorado
mikaela1107 GOLD, Castle Rock, Colorado
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Child’s Play
Singing and music
A party just begun
So many feet
Peeking through the crowd
Sparkling pennies
Scattered at the singer’s feet
A gust of wind fills the tunnel
I giggle
Spinning around to see
A train whizzes by
Mommy pulls me to the tracks
I leap over the gap
Shiny poles all around
I grab hold
And spin round’ and round’
Loving the feeling
My hair in a whirl
I plop down on the ground
And think
“Wow . . . what a world.”


Jaded Mid-life
Abrasive noise and clamor
A nightmare all over again
Too many people
Can’t get where I’m going
Dirty change
Tossed at the homeless man
A gust of wind fills the tunnel
I cringe
Turning to face it
The train arrives
I step forward
Stubbing my toe in the gap
Germ filled rails
I stay away
Brace myself for the lurch
Wanting to get off
My head pounding
I rub my temples
And think
“Wow . . . this is the world.”


Senior Serenity
Sinatra played perfectly
A place full of sights
Very busy people
Watching with wonder
Hard earned coins
Given to the musician
A gust of wind fills the tunnel
I breathe in
Standing from my seat
The train pulls to a halt
I struggle to it
Heave myself over the crack
Steadying handrails
I lean heavily
Resting my aching legs
Soaking in the commotion
My smile showing
I close my eyes
And think
“Wow. . . I’m gonna miss this world.”


The author's comments:
This piece shows how perspective changes as people grow through life and experience different aspects that the world has to offer. These experiences and mind sets shape the way people perceive thing such as a New York subway.

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