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October 4, 2012
By HankThePigeon SILVER, Wyndmoor, Pennsylvania
HankThePigeon SILVER, Wyndmoor, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
i have promise to keep and miles to go before i sleep- Robert Frost


I've tried
Believe me I've tried
But nothing is good enough for you
Why are you pushing?
Why are you so sad?
Whats with all the pressure?
I'm just one kid
I can't handle it
I don't know where my life is going
I'm still figuring things out
Heartbreaks and strange feelings are weighing me down
You are the girl that can't take a compliment
you had so much potential
I'm hopeless and lost
You are not my guiding light
I want to give up but i can't
It takes everything left in my to carry on


The author's comments:
I don't have roses in the closet, but i have pictures in a drawer, its everything left in me not to stare at them anymore

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on Oct. 17 2012 at 12:33 pm
HankThePigeon SILVER, Wyndmoor, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
i have promise to keep and miles to go before i sleep- Robert Frost

wow thanks, that really means alot to me, i'm glad you like it

on Oct. 9 2012 at 8:21 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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Wow awesome poem. You said it right- I'm just a kid, still figuring things out. Well said. I liked the way this poem was talking about being a kid and the struggles. It is all true.




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