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I woke up dumbfounded today,
Though in all the visible darkness
thy light outs it bravely
Incomparably filled with power
Yet its tenderness wonders me still
I myself not comprehend.

Mama looks happy
Jeremy smiles broadly
Can't believe it at all
Perhaps i overlook
Or my sight to poor to see
Worst, I may have humbled the situation
A mysterious atmosphere

Each day
every week seems similar
As bored as I may be
Astounded I shall ever be
A miracle it is to me
to awake to such undeniable glory
An indescribable para-normality

Its all really beautiful
Countenances smeared with peace
Hearts polluted with so much joy
May all this be hypocrisy?
Is it all nothing but a lie?
I say hallo,with my sulk
great deal of disgusting emotion

I worry no more
An obligation I keep at heart
Though so much I wish it all
Might change for goods own sake
Faith,Hope
Soon,it gets all brighter




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Toriterror This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 19, 2012 at 8:56 pm:
I don't think your work has gotten that mch attention on this site yet, but I want you to know that I've read your work and you are an extreamly talented poet an your passion for christ is extreamly admirable :)
 
chriskabzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 20, 2012 at 5:18 pm :
thanks alot for that and having the courtesy of commenting. yes as you can see I don't have the exposure that I would wish to have but I still write for it si quite obvious that art has no limitations....it takes it time to bloom.
 
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