True Young Love

October 1, 2012
Eternal glory of those who rise to the top
Mindset of the brave and the courageous
I myself believe that you will make it
Like others before you:
You are the ones too rise
Looked at, as the perfect team
I will say go for the glory
Kindness in your words
Electric shock to stun your soul
Sounds of the beat of your heart
Dig down inside yourself
Everyone will find what you have, and
Realize that they too have found it
Endlessness of your gift
Keep sacred what you have found
How special it must be to you…

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CTS207 said...
Feb. 23, 2013 at 12:47 pm
Very well done, you could be the "and' at the end as a break between verses. But in truth this is a very good poem.
Ginga-Ninga replied...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 6:59 pm
This poem was better when I had it wrote out in my notebook. The first letter of each line is a letter in "EMILY LIKES DEREK H" my BFF and sadly now her ex. it was wrote over a year ago.
GGLovesLife said...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 11:04 am
Love it! :))
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