Saying Goodbye

October 2, 2012
By xxLivxx GOLD, Preston, Other
xxLivxx GOLD, Preston, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Don’t walk in front of me, I may not follow. Don’t walk behind me, I may not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend.”

- Albert Camus


Saying goodbye
Has been so hard
But when the snow drops grow above
Soon I hope
You will be alive once more
You are in my heart
My companion
My child hood friend
The warm hot water bottle
Besides my feet whilst I slept
I will tell my grandchildren about you
Your gentle, soft purr
Still echoes around this house
The space on the chair in the corner
Is no longer occupied
By a long staying guest
Twenty years of preciousness
For my beautiful Tess



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on Oct. 25 2012 at 6:18 pm
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette

no problem. im gald that my comments mean alot! im not really famous on teenink and i dont get a lot of views eighter, so its good to know im not alone. i will infact keep commenting and your work is amazing too! i just hope more people realize it. :P keep on writing :)

xxLivxx GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2012 at 7:32 am
xxLivxx GOLD, Preston, Other
12 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Don’t walk in front of me, I may not follow. Don’t walk behind me, I may not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend.”

- Albert Camus

Thank you so much, your comments mean a lot, it is nice to know that even if it is just one person, someone appreciates my work! Your work is amazing! Please keep commenting! Thanks! :D  

xxLivxx GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 5:09 pm
xxLivxx GOLD, Preston, Other
12 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Don’t walk in front of me, I may not follow. Don’t walk behind me, I may not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend.”

- Albert Camus

Thank you so much, your comments mean a lot, it is nice to know that even if it is just one person, somone appresiates my work! Your work is amazing! Please keep commenting! Thanks! :D

on Oct. 23 2012 at 5:16 pm
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette

rip to my older sister. i think this is a realllly good poem. its explosive to the mind. My intake of it, i hope, will make u feel good about this poem. i read almost all your work. i think ur an amazing writer. check out some of my work :P


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