Somethingwrong

September 30, 2012
By gollyitshannah PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Connecticut
gollyitshannah PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"So you want a heart? You don't know how lucky you are not to have one. Hearts will never be practical until they are made unbreakable"


You are kind comma
Lovely comma

But there must be something
wrong
Period

You kiss me comma
and I hopeforthebest period
I realize comma that there
must be something
wrong
period

Then comma as if you heard my
cruel comma cruel thoughts comma
you leave me and neverreturn
period

Iamsad
parenthesis
For a while
End parenthesis

but only for a
little
while

I realize comma quitebitterly comma
that there was never anythingwrong
Ellipses

I try to see the world as it is
comma
why is it harder now you’regone
question-mark


The author's comments:
E.E. Cumming's poem "Et Cetera" inspired the structure of my poem, though I took his outline and made it my own.

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