Extremities Breached

September 27, 2012
By JacquelineBrown SILVER, Tarrs, Pennsylvania
JacquelineBrown SILVER, Tarrs, Pennsylvania
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Life sickeningly convoluted, exhorting the trail,

Hallucinating of when it finally falls through, advancing to the finish.

Razors barbed into slicing pleasure, enticing to the blood cells,

Yearning for when they are released, waiting for their metallic taste.

Oozing warmth seeps from purpled veins, finalizing the casualty,

Opening the gate to darkness, wrenching soul from dying entombment.
—Extremities Breached.

The author's comments:
This was a try at some elevated language, and I hope this will clue some of the more lucky people into what a suicidal victim had felt.

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