Split Cracks

September 28, 2012
By N.S.Clow GOLD, Aurora, Illinois
N.S.Clow GOLD, Aurora, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 2 comments

The Mirror;
It Cracks,
Breaks,
Shatters on the Floor
Because what was Once There
Is There No More


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was going through a drastic change in my life; I would look at myself in the mirror and I wouldn't see the girl I used to be. I would see the girl I am now.

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N.S.Clow GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 4:46 pm
N.S.Clow GOLD, Aurora, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 2 comments
Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading my poem! :)

on Sep. 30 2012 at 7:36 pm
live4words SILVER, Bigfork, Montana
5 articles 4 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about.

This is super good! the first time i read it, I just thought it was a really cool poem, but I wasnt quite sure what about. Then, I read it again, and WOW! I love it! :) I can totally understand the feeling, and a mirror is such a good metaphor!


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