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the wisps of an unhappy soul
dissipating like mist
when the day heats up
and expunges all traces of
misery





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RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 5:07 pm
Evaporation...?
 
wanderlustful This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 1:50 am
Metaphorically, but I'm speaking of grief here.
 
RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 12:55 pm
Haha, I know I'm just being a jerk. It's good!
 
RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 12:56 pm
I know:) just being difficult. Your poem's really good
 
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