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the wisps of an unhappy soul
dissipating like mist
when the day heats up
and expunges all traces of
misery




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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 2 at 5:07 pm:
Evaporation...?
 
wanderlustfulThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 3 at 1:50 am :
Metaphorically, but I'm speaking of grief here.
 
RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 3 at 12:55 pm :
Haha, I know I'm just being a jerk. It's good!
 
RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 3 at 12:56 pm :
I know:) just being difficult. Your poem's really good
 
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