Butterfly

September 25, 2012
By allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe me nothing is trivial"(The Crow)


My best friend was a buterfly'
she now flys as high as the sky'
the first time i saw my mother cry,
i knew it was the butterfly.
The day i saw a butterfly,
land among my gardens light.
the time my mom walked outside
hugs and comfort through the night


The author's comments:
my best friend who i wish not to name died of cancer, her symbol was a butterfly. when i say "the day i saw my mother cry" that i new it was the butterfly i mean that i never saw my mom cry for anything but my friend. i would love if this got put into a magazine because it would mean so much to me, to my family, and to the whole town in which is still mourning.

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on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:26 pm
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe me nothing is trivial"(The Crow)

its truthful and i was crying while i wrote it lol

on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:20 pm
HadynCeres BRONZE, Cleburne, Texas
1 article 6 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sweetie im not crazy i past crazy a long time ago the word your looking for is insane, now that i am" - myself

it so beautiful good job

on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:19 pm
Ghostly-Ninja, Yuma, Arizona
0 articles 3 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let not your smile,my sun,turn into icy tears

It's okay  

on Dec. 17 2012 at 11:52 am
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe me nothing is trivial"(The Crow)

...it is my own format that i was trying...

on Dec. 17 2012 at 11:52 am
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe me nothing is trivial"(The Crow)

thank you guys who wrote comments it helped me alot more then  you know

sam_101 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2012 at 12:25 pm
sam_101 BRONZE, ......................, Other
2 articles 0 photos 51 comments
Nice title and the verses are filled with emoTions. Good work

on Dec. 4 2012 at 6:59 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

This is a very sweet and heartfelt poem, Nicely done. Couple formatting errors, maybe if you cleaned those up the meaning would come through even stronger(:

on Oct. 2 2012 at 7:14 pm
Sarah_Oso SILVER, Peachtree City, Georgia
6 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live not for the-end-of-the-song. Live in the along.
(G. Brooks)

:'-( ...............

on Sep. 29 2012 at 11:22 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Like hyper here you have me crying... I am very sorry for your loss. This poem is amazing...

hypermagical said...
on Sep. 29 2012 at 11:18 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

How beautiful, Katie. You've got me crying...


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