Butterfly

My best friend was a buterfly'
she now flys as high as the sky'
the first time i saw my mother cry,
i knew it was the butterfly.
The day i saw a butterfly,
land among my gardens light.
the time my mom walked outside
hugs and comfort through the night





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HadynCeres said...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 8:20 pm
it so beautiful good job
 
allhallowsevekatie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 17, 2012 at 11:52 am
thank you guys who wrote comments it helped me alot more then  you know
 
damonischen_Engel said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 12:25 pm
Nice title and the verses are filled with emoTions. Good work
 
hypermagical said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 11:18 am
How beautiful, Katie. You've got me crying...
 
AlaskanGirl15 replied...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 11:22 am
Like hyper here you have me crying... I am very sorry for your loss. This poem is amazing...
 
Sarah_Oso This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 7:14 pm
:'-( ...............
 
SilverLuna replied...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 6:59 pm
This is a very sweet and heartfelt poem, Nicely done. Couple formatting errors, maybe if you cleaned those up the meaning would come through even stronger(:
 
allhallowsevekatie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 17, 2012 at 11:52 am
...it is my own format that i was trying...
 
Spat-the-Devil-Hamster replied...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 8:19 pm
It's okay  
 
allhallowsevekatie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 8:26 pm
its truthful and i was crying while i wrote it lol
 
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