my personal version of the road not taken

September 25, 2012
my heart belongs to the rivers,
my love goes out to the trees,
your envy belongs to the wealthy,
your anger is given to gods.
i will be me and you will be you
but to myself i will always be true
the choice is yours can go right or left,
two paths and only i choose the best.





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bulby545 said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 5:12 pm
i like this poem cuz its a shorter one so i can stay focused  and it has nice rythme
 
allhallowsevekatie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 7:11 pm
thank you ! if you liked it you should look at some of my other pieces !
 
deepoceanblue said...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 4:30 pm
Great! I loved it!
 
AlaskanGirl15 said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 11:18 am
This is amazing! I love how you took a famous poem every one Should know and gave it your own personal twist!!!
 
hypermagical said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 11:16 am
Holy awesomeness! :P I'm so glad you did this, a new take on one of my favorite poems, good job!
 
allhallowsevekatie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 11:21 am
its my favorite poem 2
 
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