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Soil rich and moist
Red liquid to moisture a newly planted seed
A caress of blush across your cheeks
Comfort words and the sound of laughter
Hugs, kisses and deep secrets
The foundation of strong roots in its early stages
Their smile
Radiation from a bright sun that creates nutrients to refuel the earth
Fights and angry works
Heavy rain beating through the ground
And then you hear the sound of thunder
Heart race then slows down
Blacken seed weighed down by heavy rain
Then comes hugs and kisses and the make-up dates
Heart beats with a lighter weight
The seed now free gives life from deep within
From the center of the heart a floor in bloom



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BlueSunsetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 8:24 am:
I reckon it is well written. I like the way you've made it into a metaphor. I like it very much, I hope you work hard and make more poems like this. Good job xx
 
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BlueSunsetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 8:24 am:
I reckon it is well written. I like the way you've made it into a metaphor. I like it very much, I hope you work hard and make more poems like this. Good job xx
 
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bagley777 said...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 1:03 am:
awww, I really liked this. Awesome job!(: 5 stars!
 
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EmmettLaFave said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 11:40 pm:
Good stuff; colorful. Keep up the nature imagery.
 
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