A Flower in bloom

September 24, 2012
By miniko PLATINUM, Germantowm, Maryland
miniko PLATINUM, Germantowm, Maryland
47 articles 20 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
i never said most of the things i said- yogi berra


Soil rich and moist
Red liquid to moisture a newly planted seed
A caress of blush across your cheeks
Comfort words and the sound of laughter
Hugs, kisses and deep secrets
The foundation of strong roots in its early stages
Their smile
Radiation from a bright sun that creates nutrients to refuel the earth
Fights and angry works
Heavy rain beating through the ground
And then you hear the sound of thunder
Heart race then slows down
Blacken seed weighed down by heavy rain
Then comes hugs and kisses and the make-up dates
Heart beats with a lighter weight
The seed now free gives life from deep within
From the center of the heart a floor in bloom


The author's comments:
Love there are complications but trials and tribulations makes the heart grows fonder

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on Sep. 29 2012 at 8:24 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

I reckon it is well written. I like the way you've made it into a metaphor. I like it very much, I hope you work hard and make more poems like this. Good job xx

on Sep. 29 2012 at 8:24 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

I reckon it is well written. I like the way you've made it into a metaphor. I like it very much, I hope you work hard and make more poems like this. Good job xx

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on Sep. 28 2012 at 1:03 am
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
11 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.

awww, I really liked this. Awesome job!(: 5 stars!

on Sep. 27 2012 at 11:40 pm
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have it in our power to begin the world over again." -Thomas Paine

Good stuff; colorful. Keep up the nature imagery.


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