She doesn't see

September 21, 2012
By deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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I smile as I walk away,
Because the things she said just made my day,
And the way she shines like the golden sun,
It makes the fear and pain just start to run.

And I don't think she sees.

And when I'm near her she's all I can focus on.
And I would tell you what I'm feeling but I don't know what's going on.
I can't help but think about her when we're apart.
Thinking about how much she holds my heart.

And I don't think she sees.

She makes me laugh, without making a sound.
And I can't help but wonder what she thinks as she turns around,
And together we look up at the sky,
Wondering if we could ever learn how to fly.

And I don't think she sees.

If she would just take my hand together we'd soar,
But I don't know if I can wait anymore.
So now I look up at the stars the whole night through,
Knowing how if feels to be alone. Me without you.

And I don't think she sees...
What she means to me.



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on Oct. 19 2012 at 10:33 am
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Thanks :) I still don't think she sees.... sad.....

bagley777 GOLD said...
on Oct. 18 2012 at 7:30 pm
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.

aww this poem is so cute! And romantic(; It's also really well written. I like it a lot(:

on Sep. 26 2012 at 7:16 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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:)

on Sep. 26 2012 at 7:10 pm
dancing.inthe.rain GOLD, Bowling Green, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"We all fear death and question our place in the universe. The artist's job is not to subcome to dispair, but to find an antidote for the emptiness of existance." -Gertrude Stein in the movie Midnight In Paris.

i love this! makes me think so much about my own feelings for my boy. it´s a great poem :) can´t wait to read your other work 


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