Stop Loving You

September 21, 2012
By deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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When in the morning no birds do sing,
at the moment that bells can no more ring,
The time fire has no heating powers,
The spring that contains no earthly flowers,
When two points won't form a line,
When the stars refuse to shine,
When dreams can no more fly,
When tears don't come when you cry,
When the sun doesn't rise at dawn,
When the point of life is gone,
When the sky is no longer blue,
That is the day, the day I'll stop loving you.



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on Jan. 25 2013 at 10:12 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Thanks a ton :) It really means a lot when people take the time to read my poems :)

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2012 at 9:45 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

That deserves to be said to the right guy or girl! 5 stars. I love it!

on Nov. 30 2012 at 9:14 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Thanks a lot :)

on Nov. 30 2012 at 9:07 pm
PandaBearLouise16 BRONZE, Lyndonville, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
LOUD NOISES!
I love lamp.....
IM KICKIN MY @$$ DOYA MIND???????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow so......powerful....... :) i love it! 5 star for sure!

on Oct. 19 2012 at 12:08 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Thanks a ton :)

Blaque SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:48 am
Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
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this one is beautiful. this compares and contrast it's the very point of what this world revolves... it's beautiful.

on Oct. 1 2012 at 3:47 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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yeah... I probably should. But I'm probably not going to....

on Oct. 1 2012 at 3:00 am
OWLSLOVESIX GOLD, Union, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened!"
~ Dr. Seuss

Yes you really should!!! And while you're at it read her on of these 5 million poems you wrote for HER!!! btw they r really good!

on Sep. 29 2012 at 1:38 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Hey thanks :) yeah. I probably should right?

on Sep. 27 2012 at 10:49 pm
OWLSLOVESIX GOLD, Union, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened!"
~ Dr. Seuss

This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooosweet it makes me want to be that lucky girl! You should really tell her! She might actually love you too! Take a chance! ~Owls! <3

on Sep. 26 2012 at 10:01 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it!

on Sep. 26 2012 at 7:47 pm
dancing.inthe.rain GOLD, Bowling Green, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"We all fear death and question our place in the universe. The artist's job is not to subcome to dispair, but to find an antidote for the emptiness of existance." -Gertrude Stein in the movie Midnight In Paris.

it´s so sweet and romantic! i absolutly love it :)




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