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Stop Loving You

When in the morning no birds do sing,
at the moment that bells can no more ring,
The time fire has no heating powers,
The spring that contains no earthly flowers,
When two points won't form a line,
When the stars refuse to shine,
When dreams can no more fly,
When tears don't come when you cry,
When the sun doesn't rise at dawn,
When the point of life is gone,
When the sky is no longer blue,
That is the day, the day I'll stop loving you.





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LunaLives said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:45 pm
That deserves to be said to the right guy or girl! 5 stars. I love it!
 
deepoceanblue replied...
Jan. 25, 2013 at 10:12 pm
Thanks a ton :) It really means a lot when people take the time to read my poems :)
 
KeishaLouise15 said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:07 pm
wow so......powerful....... :) i love it! 5 star for sure!
 
deepoceanblue replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:14 pm
Thanks a lot :)
 
Blaque said...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:48 am
this one is beautiful. this compares and contrast it's the very point of what this world revolves... it's beautiful.
 
deepoceanblue replied...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 12:08 pm
Thanks a ton :)
 
OWLSLOVESIX said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 10:49 pm
This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooosweet it makes me want to be that lucky girl! You should really tell her! She might actually love you too! Take a chance! ~Owls! <3
 
deepoceanblue replied...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 1:38 pm
Hey thanks :) yeah. I probably should right?
 
OWLSLOVESIX replied...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 3:00 am
Yes you really should!!! And while you're at it read her on of these 5 million poems you wrote for HER!!! btw they r really good!
 
deepoceanblue replied...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 3:47 pm
yeah... I probably should. But I'm probably not going to....
 
dancing.in.the.rain.likeaninja said...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 7:47 pm
it´s so sweet and romantic! i absolutly love it :)
 
deepoceanblue replied...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 10:01 pm
Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it!
 
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