September 19, 2012
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Is that what I feel?
Soaring...higher, higher.
I know I should feel crushed.
But I'm lifted. Carried.
Carefully taken from this place.
Why was I lost for so long?
In my own world.
With you.
You would only put me down.
In the past...
Bittersweet sound to my ears.
Secrets. Scars.
Why is life so cruel?
I'm asking these questions, but you don't answer.
Are you there?
My choices...are they all right with you?
Please don't be upset with me.
Are you going to miss us?
Do you have regret?
That's what you told me.
Everyone gets pushed past their limit at some point.
...But they stay strong.
Do I disappoint you?
Are you crying?
Tears for what, exactly?
Me, or you?
You told me to think of others first.
But you never showed me how.
I'm hurt...and you don't understand why.
I've reached my limit...

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RainyMood This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 28, 2013 at 8:33 pm
wow speechless....was this about death? I got that vibe idk i could be wrong
Pargaran replied...
Oct. 31, 2013 at 9:53 pm
Now that I read it over with that in mind, it sure could be! Or maybe even SHOULD be! I actually don't remember what I was thinking of when I wrote it. Although I have a feeling it's about an inner battle that was finally won.
ramona7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 28, 2013 at 12:18 am
whew!!!!! don't ever say that you are good in drawing only!!!1 writing is your talent have immense up to it....
Pargaran replied...
Oct. 31, 2013 at 9:45 pm
I certainly used to feel that way, but things have changed! Thank you for your kind words, it means so much. (:
GGLovesLife said...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 7:35 pm
I love it a lot!! :)
Pargaran replied...
Aug. 17, 2013 at 2:50 pm
Thank you! :D
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