Broken Back Broken Heart

September 15, 2012
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Broken back black eyes
Heart ache no surprise
Days end
No friends

Broken heart
Torn apart
Fake smile
That'll stay a while

Loved girl
She knows it’s her world
lookin' at her subjects
Livin' life with no regrets.

Broken back
Broken heart
So small things
To tear apart

My life
Killed strife
Happy lives
Lovely eyes

It’s different now
I know how
To be me now..

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Intrepidnzx said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 10:46 pm
you didnt even try to anylize it nor think about it. it is an obviouse poem teh most simple minded could figure out what it means
Hannabug said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 9:14 pm
Hey this is a very good poem :) 
Intrepidnzx said...
Sept. 22, 2012 at 6:14 pm
it is supposed to mean that at first i tried to be me and no one liked it then i tried to be popular then everyone besides me liked it... but i decided to go back to me and i knwo how to be okay with that now...
ToxicAngel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2012 at 3:09 am
Interesting. I like the rhyme scheme, but I'm not crazy about the poem as a whole. I feel like the words and their meanings don't flow well together, like you just smacked down a paper onto a table, grabbed a pencil, and said, "I'm gonna rhyme some sad words and some happy words and it's gonna seem deep and melodramatic!" but then it kinda fell flat. Don't take that personally or too seriously. I honestly like the concept of this poem, I think it has promise, and I ... (more »)
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