Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > broken heart broken heart By jazzy93, Memphis, TN More by this author please un-break my heart i dont want to feel this pain i dont want my heart to be broken « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 1 comment. Post your own! Report abuse ToxicAngel said... Sept. 19, 2012 at 3:39 am: It's so short and it's not even a poem, it's just words. I believe in this idea, this broken heart has potential, but you need to work on it. :) Let your pain inspire you, honey. This poem could be a lot better and I think it will once you clear your mind and let your heart speak.