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i missed you
please un-break my heart
i dont want to feel this pain
i dont want my heart to be broken



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ToxicAngelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2012 at 3:39 am:
It's so short and it's not even a poem, it's just words. I believe in this idea, this broken heart has potential, but you need to work on it. :) Let your pain inspire you, honey. This poem could be a lot better and I think it will once you clear your mind and let your heart speak.
 
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