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Love's Sacrifice

Hold me down,
Wrap me in an iron crown,
You are not lost,
I am not found.

Throw down your soul,
Across the vine,
Show me your light,
I’ll show you mine,
Together we’ll make our very own time.

Close on your sides,
And slam the doors,
Steal me by force,
Wrap me in your warmth,
Now hold my hand tight inside of yours.

Against you I’ll show everything,
We’ll form a path,
We’ll learn how to sing,
Together we will do our very own things.

Steady me now,
Throughout the nights,
Capture from me breath,
Help me to make love’s sacrifice.




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anshikanagar This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 10:53 am:
Make it a song..it will be like blue foundation...
 
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incognito411This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 7:02 pm:
this is amazing i love it :) i love the rhyme n rhythm of it, if u find someone who plays guitar or something, it could be a song! think of tryin out writing something with a tune, this has potential!
 
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