Nothing to do with the Sun.

September 14, 2012
By LeeLeeBuggies SILVER, Wilmerding, Pennsylvania
LeeLeeBuggies SILVER, Wilmerding, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Believe in yourself."

On a foggy night- a ray!
Crystal clear as day!
My eyes light up with hope,
Longing to grab the rope,
Of sunshine, of happiness.

My world is bloody- dreary.
My heart shut down- it’s weary.
Then across the sky,
The light, the sight made me cry.
Of sunshine, of happiness.

In the dark,
No place to call my,
The death and hate,
Set fire to the,
So I stand,
Nothing to do, but,
Longing to climb that bright, tempting rope,
Of sunshine, of happiness.

The author's comments:
I wrote this to mirror my own feelings. Sometimes you feel hopeless as I do in this poem.

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on Sep. 29 2012 at 8:43 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Nice poem :) keep it up xx

bagley777 GOLD said...
on Sep. 28 2012 at 10:19 pm
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
11 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.

Loved this poem(: especially the rythm at the end. Awesome job! 5 stars!(:

on Sep. 28 2012 at 6:14 pm
Melanie_Rose GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I’m selfish, impatient, and insecure. I make mistakes. I am out of control and at times, hard to handle. But if you can’t handle me at my worst, then you don’t deserve me at my best.”
- Marilyn Monroe

I do say, this poem is very good ^__^ I hope you write more(:

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