Once were

September 12, 2012
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You once were my reason to breathe, You were my sunshine in times of need, You were my umbrella when i needed it, You caught me when i started falling. For some reason we have grew farther and farther away from each other. Not a day goes by that i can't stop thinking about you. Please tell me why? I guess you losing me was the best thing you have ever experienced...Well i guess its time to realize your not my shoulder in times of need, Your just an ash in my fire. Now that i am letting you go please promise me you won't forget me</3

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ladybugsrock said...
Sept. 13, 2012 at 6:24 pm
This poem has some really great word choice and descriptions! Keep adding more and maybe even describe more of the emotions you may be feeling! Really grat though! Please comment, read, and rate my poems as well! Thank you!
malya said...
Sept. 13, 2012 at 5:54 pm
interesting. im having trouble with the flow of it, but the words were well chosen, and the point is clear  
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