why did this happen?

September 12, 2012
By shortcake827 BRONZE, Wood Dale, Illinois
shortcake827 BRONZE, Wood Dale, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you love something let it go...if it comes back to you then its yours...if it doesnt then it never was"


why?...why do you do this to me?
my life for the first time was going so good
with three simple words
you crushed me
you said...
do you remember?
well i do
i remember what you did to me
i remember that you stole me
you stole the one thing i was suppose to give willingly to the person i love
why?
why did you do that?
why did you destroy my life?
did you think i would forget?
did you think it would have no effect?
just stop
stop talking
stop seeing
stop breathing
stop taking over my mind
you stole something from me...
my innocence



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on Sep. 16 2012 at 9:43 pm
shortcake827 BRONZE, Wood Dale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"if you love something let it go...if it comes back to you then its yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

thanks! and i was ...and i will never stop writing...i love poetry it helps me cope with how m feeling about  things it really helps alot :) it makes me happy to know tht people actually like my work 

on Sep. 16 2012 at 9:41 pm
shortcake827 BRONZE, Wood Dale, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you love something let it go...if it comes back to you then its yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

thank u! :) means alot 

on Sep. 15 2012 at 11:09 am
JayJay1998 BRONZE, Lenexa, Kansas
2 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Inspiration exists, but it has to find you working." -Pablo Picasso

This is an AMAZING poem. It litteraly brought me to tears. Great Job!  

on Sep. 14 2012 at 10:40 am
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND, Auburntown, Tennessee
57 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Are We Happy Plastic People"- Casting Crowns "While we're sung to sleep by philosophies that save the trees and kill the children" - Casting Crowns "It's such a secret place, the land of tears"Antoine de Saint-Exupery

Great writing...so deep and knowing from personal experience, you captured the words to describe how you feel in that situation. 

on Sep. 13 2012 at 7:28 pm
SweetSacrifice BRONZE, Butternut, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
you can't choose who breaks you, but you can choose to pick yourself back up and put yourself back together again

i loved this poem i could tell that when you were writing this it was like you were trying to understand why you in your mind... Very powerful, dont stop writing


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