why did this happen?

September 12, 2012
why?...why do you do this to me?
my life for the first time was going so good
with three simple words
you crushed me
you said...
do you remember?
well i do
i remember what you did to me
i remember that you stole me
you stole the one thing i was suppose to give willingly to the person i love
why did you do that?
why did you destroy my life?
did you think i would forget?
did you think it would have no effect?
just stop
stop talking
stop seeing
stop breathing
stop taking over my mind
you stole something from me...
my innocence

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JayJay1998 said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 11:09 am
This is an AMAZING poem. It litteraly brought me to tears. Great Job!  
shortcake827 replied...
Sept. 16, 2012 at 9:41 pm
thank u! :) means alot 
Shortblueeyes224 said...
Sept. 14, 2012 at 10:40 am
Great writing...so deep and knowing from personal experience, you captured the words to describe how you feel in that situation. 
SweetSacrifice said...
Sept. 13, 2012 at 7:28 pm
i loved this poem i could tell that when you were writing this it was like you were trying to understand why you in your mind... Very powerful, dont stop writing
shortcake827 replied...
Sept. 16, 2012 at 9:43 pm
thanks! and i was ...and i will never stop writing...i love poetry it helps me cope with how m feeling about  things it really helps alot :) it makes me happy to know tht people actually like my work 
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