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Love's Confusion

The blues and reds
Surround your being
Fire and ice meeting
Seems to be so freeing

The steam creates a fog
One impossible to see through
Though I am afraid
It is peaceful in this purple hue

Suddenly the fog evaporates
It is replaced by a night sky
One dotted with many stars
Like millions of watching eyes

Paranoia strikes
My heart starts to race
I take a single step forward
And the stars vanish into space

My feet start to run
Until the ground is gone
I hit the floor with a smack
And see your eyes once more

The reds and blues are back
The purple clouds make me sane
As fire and ice starts to sizzle
And makes beautiful music once again



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SoulPoetry said...
Apr. 28, 2013 at 11:01 pm:
I see a Frost reference :D it's a beautiful poem btw:)
 
Thatgirlwhoseemstobeignored replied...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 10:30 pm :
Thank you :)
 
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Ruby-Paige-Rose said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 9:59 pm:
I really liked the contrast.
 
NHBound37 replied...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 10:15 pm :
Thanks a bunch!  
 
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OWLSLOVESIX said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 10:17 pm:
This is really good! I didn't really get it till I read what you wrote to go with it. This is such a butiful poem! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Owls
 
NHBound37 replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 10:52 pm :
Thanks a bunch! I'm really happy I put the explanation up there now :) After I started looking at other's poems and I saw that they didn't have explanations and I was freaking out! Anyways, I'm going to try my best to write some more poems in the next week ^_^ I'd love for you to read them and the rest of my stuff!
 
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HummingbirdHeart said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 1:10 pm:
I love this poem. You did a great job! :D
 
NHBound37 replied...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 1:17 pm :
Thanks! ^_^
 
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Jazzluv411 said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 6:35 pm:
I love this, i liked how you used different things to represent you and him and everything around you:)
 
NHBound37 replied...
Sept. 22, 2012 at 12:46 pm :
Thanks a bunch! :)
 
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