Dear Mom

September 6, 2012
By brittanyc SILVER, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
brittanyc SILVER, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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just because you have it doesnt mean you use it


You are my rock
On which I stand,
My anchor to this world.
I cling to you,
For my strength,
I cling to you to hold,
Just saying thank you
Wouldn't be enough,
I’d need to say it so much
To actually show you how,
Much I thank you.
How much I need you
Cannot be expressed in,
Word, or in a simple way.
I love you because
When I look at you I see,
Someone strong hanging on
For the sake of those,
You love.
When I grow up
I know this is the kind of,
Person I want to be
Someone strong,
Just like you.
You mean so much to
Me. So much,
You’ll never see
The end of what I,
Feel towards you
You are my rainbow
Of color,
You brighten up my life,
You shine through the clouds
Like the sun on a cloudy day.
You are the person I
Most look up to,
The person who shows me
How to live, breath, and
Exist.
You save me from,
The flood of my emotions.
I love you
Forever and always



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on Apr. 16 2013 at 10:14 am
brittanyc SILVER, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
just because you have it doesnt mean you use it

thanks for the feedback

on Apr. 16 2013 at 10:14 am
brittanyc SILVER, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
just because you have it doesnt mean you use it

Thanks for the feed back and comment

on Apr. 11 2013 at 12:01 pm
carmenjean BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
What would you attempt to do if you knew you could not fail? ~Unknown

The emotion in this poem is very deep and relateable, for my mother is my hero as well. It's very nice and sincere. Thanks for sharing! Really enjoyed (:

on Nov. 28 2012 at 12:32 pm
A.ranney BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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I love the subject you chose to write about and to who it was to. I also really loved your word choice.


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