"New Perspective"

September 3, 2012
By psnipes23 SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
psnipes23 SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
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we all have loved
we all have lost
I've always hoped
I've always fell short
we've always wondered why
instead of figuring out how...
fireworks are like waking up, your eyes are opened up but you never know exactly what color you'll see next..
my idea of fireworks is that one feeling you get inside when u take your girls hand that's fingers fit perfectly in between yours... 
what's next the finale...
of course the finale!
that's when she looks me in the eyes and smiles and our lips meet in the moonlight.
she puts it in a new view;
a new perspective 
she's my moment of clarity
my moment of pure joy
she's mine...
and I hope to keep it that way.

-inspired by Brittany Victoria Springs

The author's comments:
this girl improves a flaw of mine every time I see her face; if I could have one wish, it would be to always have her embrace. I love you Brittany

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on Sep. 9 2012 at 10:25 pm
psnipes23 SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
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thanks, she really is:) and sure thing

on Sep. 8 2012 at 1:05 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."

This is one of the sweetest and nicest peices I have ever read. Really fantastic poem...Brittany must be amazing. Would you mind commenting on some of my work? thanks!


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