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Those lips
Like whipped cream on strawberry shortcake
I just want a taste
And the world will be at peace
And the birds will sing
And the ugly cats will purr

I crave
The feel
Of those lips
Embracing mine
Like a rainbow after rain
All will be dandy and fine

That’s the way it should be
Our lips entwined
Like a leaf on a tree
Or a thorn on a vine
Our lips forever entwined

I want that kiss so bad
It hurts
Like when an eye doesn't twinkle
Or the grass is yellow

The lack of kiss
Is breaking nature
Stepping on clouds
Or walking on eggshells

Please let me kiss

Those lips.



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the3rdkind said...
Oct. 6, 2012 at 9:12 pm:
very romantic, great. 
 
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Aegis said...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 11:36 pm:
Embodies desire toa tee. I really like it.
 
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allhallowsevekatieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 3:27 pm:
love this piece! please rate some of mine
 
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IlovemeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 5:57 am:
I can just feel your words! beautifully written! check out my work too :D
 
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rianterren said...
Oct. 3, 2012 at 11:22 pm:
I really enjoyed this, it has a lot of emotion it's great! You're really talented!
 
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S.C.O.P.T.E.EThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 7, 2012 at 12:58 am:
I really felt the emotion on the last one there...a truly creative and emotional expression of ones desires.....I really admire your work and hope to see poets like you do what you do best...Write :) !!!
 
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Ruby-Paige-Rose said...
Sept. 5, 2012 at 5:24 pm:
This makes me want to kiss someone. I love it!
 
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writer3499 said...
Sept. 5, 2012 at 5:00 pm:
powerful peice, i can really feel your feelings! So fantastic job!
 
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