Blacker MAG

August 29, 2012
By Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
36 articles 1 photo 77 comments

What will be?
Turquoise waves
Royally ripple
Footprints
Of babies
Haunt us

We created
Personal
Monsters
Slimy suds
Washing faces
Scrubbing strongly
Cannot conceal
Dirty dinosaurs

Times of bliss
Dropped like vases
All of a sudden
Black is blacker
White is yellowed
Love is selfish
Squeezed sand
Slips out
Like light

Looking around
Humanity's
Universe
Merely perception
Each their own
What do we share?

Skipping pebbles
What do they feel?
Bouncing on water
Toppling toward
Brighter fish
Glistening scales
Glorified
Bubbles

Fearless chins
Lift to winds
Eyes squinted
Power
Struggles
One glance
Reveals
Worlds



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on Nov. 17 2017 at 2:24 am
Katyaini SILVER, Greater Noida, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a chocolate covered chilly....

Some succeed because they're destined to;
Most succeed because they're determined too

I love your unique perspective and the poem depicts well the sensitivity that seems innate in you. Congrats for getting published!

on Dec. 12 2012 at 8:21 pm
HaileySanden PLATINUM, Folsom, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing."
-Benjamin Franklin

I think we do have similar styles :) This is fantastic! I love the flow and the imagery. You're really talented :)

on Oct. 7 2012 at 1:55 am
missyEagles BRONZE, Somewhere, Other
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I JUST LOVE IT !! GR8 WORK !KEEP IT UP !

hypermagical said...
on Oct. 4 2012 at 4:17 pm
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

This is beautiful! You create an amazing imagery and backstory while allowing the reader to interpret as they please. 5 stars

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on Sep. 23 2012 at 8:54 am
maximel GOLD, Dakar, Other
10 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
“There is nothing you can see that is not a flower; there is nothing you can think that is not the moon.”

— Matsuo Bashō (松尾 芭蕉)

this is beautiful! 

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2012 at 5:54 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

The flow was nice.

on Sep. 5 2012 at 7:10 pm
stupendousman BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
2 articles 13 photos 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, guys, if there's no wind, there's nothing to blow the leaves around." - from "Sons of Provo"
"Tough times never last, but tough people do"
"the best things in life aren't things"

I really like this poem! you put a lot of thought into it! please rate and comment on my artwork!  


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