August 30, 2012
By Manje GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
Manje GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
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As I see couples embracing each other,
I just wonder where is my significant other?
I keep wondering why do I feel so torn when I'm near couples,
What is wrong with me?
Then I see it's the heartaches that are in me,
And my feeling of love sinks to the bottom of the sea.

When I first kissed her,
I knew I was in love.
My mind would float and go high above,
Now that's gone, high above will I fall,
And when I hit the ground, it will all end.

Trying to give this love a second chance,
But now I see love can be so rant.
When I see other couples it hurts my heart,
Because in that girl, me, I left a part.

Moved on, I have,
But giving a second chance is hard, maybe I cant.
We'll see.
But for now my heart still feels solitary,
From all the heartache that feels like it's hereditary.

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Manje GOLD said...
on Sep. 7 2012 at 6:30 pm
Manje GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
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I'm just started putting up my poems, I hope u like them and if you do tell others! Highly appreciate all of those that have read my poem and I will take any constuctive critism to get better!!!

CK310 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 3 2012 at 9:22 pm
CK310 BRONZE, Monsey, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"It is better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what your not" ~Kurt Cobain

this is really nice! but sometimes being single isn't a terrible thing, it gives you time to grow as an individual. either way I really enjoyed this:)

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2012 at 6:32 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

Sometimes I feel the same way. You made it very relatable but still origional.

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