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She fell down

August 26, 2012
By TheLostDoe GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
TheLostDoe GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“She says nothing at all, but simply stares upward into the dark sky and watches, with sad eyes, the slow dance of the infinite stars.” - Neil Gaiman


Uncertainty raced through her veins.
It traveled through her like lava - slowly yet scorching everything in its path.
Her heart skipped beats, like a bird with a broken wing.
Fear of the unknown clenched her stomach.
Rapid, ugly thoughts raced through her head, pushing the tears from her eyes.
In attempt to shake off the weight of the feeling, she bruised her heart.
With a blurred vision, she reached out her hand.
Loneliness grabbed her.
The floor vanished.
Warmth in the winter.
Stolen kisses.
Shining eyes.
All gone - as she hit the bottom.


The author's comments:
words can't seem to describe it perfectly..

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LunaLives GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2012 at 11:24 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

Very vivid.

on Sep. 29 2012 at 7:57 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Love it. Short and simple, yet still an amazing piece. Good job x

bagley777 GOLD said...
on Sep. 29 2012 at 12:34 am
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.

This is a really amazing poem.(: