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What if the rain is simply teardrops
Created by the sadness of the stars?
What if the wind is their sighs
As they look at us from afar?
What if lightening is anger-
The stars lashing out in rage?
Maybe their emotions have poured out for centuries
As they live from age to age.



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LittleLadybird said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 11:23 am:
Aww thank you so much!! :)
 
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krittika said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 3:36 am:
It's an amazing poem!  :D And deep as well :P  Few can write this way. :)
 
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Alex-Mercer said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 1:40 pm:
WOOOW IVE NEVER READ SOMETHING THAT DEEP. KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!
 
LittleLadybird replied...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 1:43 pm :
Thanx Alex! :D this wasnt the piece I meant to link to u though!! :S haha thanks anyways, means a lot :) x
 
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