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What if the rain is simply teardrops?

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The stars hang above us
Watching all of our actions
Our words
Our fights.
They see us hurt each other and make our friends cry.
They see us judge each other as we question why.
How can our struggles not move them?
How can our sorrow not make them cry?

What if the rain is simply teardrops
Created by the sadness of the stars?
What if the wind is their sighs
As they look at us from afar?
What if lightening is anger-
The stars lashing out in rage?
Their emotions have poured out for centuries
As they live from age to age.



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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 5:31 pm:
Very original and beautiful, you have a way of conveying your message with such amazing imagery, its a little like my style. I love this!
 
LittleLadybirdThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 6:09 pm :
That means so much, thank you!!! :D
 
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emmagm said...
Jun. 2, 2013 at 10:07 am:
I love this! Such a lovely melancholy idea and the writing is great too :) Nice work!
 
LittleLadybirdThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 3, 2013 at 3:15 am :
Aww thank you!! :)
 
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