August 29, 2012
By L5Na_J BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
L5Na_J BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
You only live once

With so many words to say I grab my pad and pen. As I look at where I am and the places I have been. Falsehood is my reality, and people LOVE to pretend. So I keep tabs on my enemies,because there's no such thing as friends. Passion t about all I do, but love is lost in the end. Wish I was heartless like the Tin-man, and could never feel again. My soul spiritually in the grave,my heart full of sin. Rest in peace, eternal sleep, say your prayers end with "Amen". The world left me all alone on life's stages in the dark. I guess my story's acapella, cuz there's no beat to my heart.

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on Sep. 2 2012 at 1:57 am
jenniedepoet SILVER, Stanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
love the world when it is and isnt right.

i...LOVED THIS POEM!!:) great use of words.  i like when you said  "my soul spiritually in the grave, my heart full of sin. rest in peace, eternal sleep, say your prayers end with Amen" SOOOOO CREATIVE...ABSOLUTLY 5 OUT OF 5:) YOUR REALLY TALENTED

on Sep. 1 2012 at 9:43 pm
DirectingGabs GOLD, Texas, Texas
19 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.\"

This gave me chills, I completly loved it! Please keep writing(:

on Aug. 31 2012 at 1:02 pm
Padoodallee GOLD, Haven, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw the angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." -Michelangelou

Great ending! Everything flowed to that last statement to make it meaningful and memorable.

on Aug. 30 2012 at 7:53 pm
Kat_Poetry BRONZE, Neenah, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"But without the dark, we would never see the stars"

I love this. It shows so much emotion flows great. I think like this sometimes too. I loved the poem!


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