I Can Still

August 22, 2012
By turtlehurtle SILVER, Tallahassee, Florida
turtlehurtle SILVER, Tallahassee, Florida
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I can still smell you
I can still feel your arms around me
I can still feel your lips on my cheek
I can still feel your lips on mine
I can still hear your voice as you softly whispered:


"I love you"
I can still hear your voice as you said:


"I DONT love you"
I still remember what it felt like to die
I still remember how you didn't care
I still remember the look on your face
I still remember the feel of the look in mine,


The hate.
I still remember the tears
I still remember you walking away
You leaving me to die alone
I see you coming back
I see you look at me with hope
I see the tears that stain your cheeks
I see you strectch out your arms
I see you mouth the words:


"Im sorry"
Do i forgive you?
I do.
I love you.



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on Nov. 2 2012 at 12:44 pm
BubblyTea BRONZE, Madison, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Plant the thought,
Watch it grow.
Wind it up,
And let it go. -Glen Hansard

I liked it. All of your pieces seem to be about a breakup....you should write a story :D you've got a good flow with words. c;

maximel GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2012 at 1:48 pm
maximel GOLD, Dakar, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“There is nothing you can see that is not a flower; there is nothing you can think that is not the moon.”

— Matsuo Bashō (松尾 芭蕉)

Uuuugh I know the feel. Wonderfully done. 


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