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I can still smell you
I can still feel your arms around me
I can still feel your lips on my cheek
I can still feel your lips on mine
I can still hear your voice as you softly whispered:


"I love you"
I can still hear your voice as you said:


"I DONT love you"
I still remember what it felt like to die
I still remember how you didn't care
I still remember the look on your face
I still remember the feel of the look in mine,


The hate.
I still remember the tears
I still remember you walking away
You leaving me to die alone
I see you coming back
I see you look at me with hope
I see the tears that stain your cheeks
I see you strectch out your arms
I see you mouth the words:


"Im sorry"
Do i forgive you?
I do.
I love you.




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BubblyTeaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 2, 2012 at 12:44 pm:
I liked it. All of your pieces seem to be about a breakup....you should write a story :D you've got a good flow with words. c;
 
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maximel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 1:48 pm:
Uuuugh I know the feel. Wonderfully done. 
 
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