Symptoms of a Heartbreak

August 22, 2012
By S.C.O.P.T.E.E PLATINUM, Bakersfield, California
S.C.O.P.T.E.E PLATINUM, Bakersfield, California
27 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Strive for excellence, success will follow.

The ones i loved have faded away
That lead to me going astray
My love had never died
I stood in a room and cried

Sure shes said its me not you
But i know that's not true
She blamed it on me, I guess i deserved that
She didn't love me like i love her, I did observe that

Why people change, I never get that
They don't care and forget
My feelings and the pain I felt
They don't know, the damage it has dealt

I'm still walking
The world is stalking
Left heartless, regardless i never backed out
I know the secrets, the lies but I never shout

Now I know what this is all about
I should never have suspected my doubt
All my life I have fought
Love, Fear, Anger, The Thought....

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on Aug. 31 2012 at 1:06 am
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
36 articles 1 photo 77 comments
Yes, life is a constant struggle. People saying that they changed just means that they were never right for you in the first place. True love is forever. Maybe she wasn't complex enough to know how to love you properly. She had her own issues, y'know? I really like this. I would loveee to hear your feedback on my own poetry:) Thank you for sharing!


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