The Moon

August 17, 2012
By , selangore, Malaysia
Arise in dark,
White in colour,
Surrounded by thousand golden stars
And gives a bright light,
Which reflects from the sun.

Makes the children sleep
by giving them nice dreams
and brings peace to the world
in a quiet calm sound.

Makes the mind forget
the jealousy,anger and so
and makes the world a paradise
where people don't fight
even for a little time.

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Silver2black said...
Sept. 1, 2012 at 4:12 pm
"jealousy,anger and so and makes.." there is a space missing, could be like "jealousy, anger"; and maybe there are too many 'Ands' Other than that Good imagination, Very creative :D I love this Haseena! 
Haseenarulz replied...
Sept. 1, 2012 at 10:56 pm
Thanks alot for dropping by silver2black...... Itz really inspiring me...Pls keep in touch!
Suhail Hai said...
Sept. 1, 2012 at 3:41 pm
Hi Haseena, I like your poem very much  Coz itz in simple language which every one can understand... you can do a great thing in future... KEEP IT UP..
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