5 boys, One Dream.

August 17, 2012
Once, there were 5 boys
who shared the same dream.

Never did they know that their
Determination to achieve that dream
would affect the lives of the many.

Just a little more than 2 years ago,
they were nothing but those 5 boys
who auditioned for the X-Factor,
Hoping to have their dreams come true.

Now, there they are,
living the dreams that they have dreamt for so long

As a group of musician
that affects people
with their music.

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Prehistoric-Fool said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 11:48 am
I get the story you're telling of the 5 boys who auditioned for and pursued their dreams... but I feel like this sounds less like a poem and more like a statement. Also, check up on your grammar, but otherwise- keep writing! :)
literaturepumpkin replied...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 10:08 am
thank you for the feedback! I'll most definitely put that into consideration when I write my next poem.
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