5 boys, One Dream.

August 17, 2012
By literaturepumpkin SILVER, Frederick, Maryland
literaturepumpkin SILVER, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
'Even for something good, it will always be a poison to you if there is too much of it.'


Once, there were 5 boys
who shared the same dream.

Never did they know that their
Determination to achieve that dream
would affect the lives of the many.

Just a little more than 2 years ago,
they were nothing but those 5 boys
who auditioned for the X-Factor,
Hoping to have their dreams come true.

Now, there they are,
living the dreams that they have dreamt for so long

As a group of musician
that affects people
with their music.


The author's comments:
This is to show a little bit of my dedication towards One Direction!

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on Sep. 23 2012 at 10:08 am
literaturepumpkin SILVER, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
'Even for something good, it will always be a poison to you if there is too much of it.'

thank you for the feedback! I'll most definitely put that into consideration when I write my next poem.

on Aug. 19 2012 at 11:48 am
Prehistoric-Fool GOLD, Wellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
“Every path is the right path. Everything could’ve been anything else. And it would have just as much meaning.”

Nemo Nobody

I get the story you're telling of the 5 boys who auditioned for and pursued their dreams... but I feel like this sounds less like a poem and more like a statement. Also, check up on your grammar, but otherwise- keep writing! :)


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