I Don't Suffer From Insanity, I Enjoy Every Second of it

August 16, 2012
By TertleWacks PLATINUM, Elizabeth, Pennsylvania
TertleWacks PLATINUM, Elizabeth, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I am an ocean. I am the sea. There is a world inside of me. ~ Bring Me the Horizon
We're young and in love. The heart attacks are waiting to happen. Come a little closer. Tell me those three little words. ~Bring Me The Horizon


I love that feeling, that final freedom.

I'm cut off from the world because it pushed me too far.

The world shoved me off a cliff and I finally lost it.

I landed on my back and my collapsed lungs started to bleed.

I got up and started walking.

Nowhere yet. Just away.

Away from all the pain. Away from all the grey.

The last life was boring.

This one, I'm enjoying.

The sweet smell of irony is what feeds my insanity.

I'm not human.

I'm a machine.

But, it's better than before.


The author's comments:
Yep.

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on Aug. 20 2012 at 9:54 pm
CharlieSmoke GOLD, Lowell, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
“Nature is a haunted house--but Art--is a house that tries to be haunted.”
- Emily Dickinson

lol, anytime

on Aug. 20 2012 at 10:09 am
TertleWacks PLATINUM, Elizabeth, Pennsylvania
24 articles 15 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am an ocean. I am the sea. There is a world inside of me. ~ Bring Me the Horizon
We're young and in love. The heart attacks are waiting to happen. Come a little closer. Tell me those three little words. ~Bring Me The Horizon

Thank you so much :D

on Aug. 18 2012 at 4:19 pm
CharlieSmoke GOLD, Lowell, Massachusetts
18 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Nature is a haunted house--but Art--is a house that tries to be haunted.”
- Emily Dickinson

hi! this poem seemed so familiar, then i realized it was how ive felt so many times. this subject and feeling has inspired a lot of what i write about. im very glad you wrote this, although it has some errors in my opinion. for example, many of the sentence structures are very similar. you may want to either vary them or use the repetition to your advantage. overall though i liked your piece, and id like to see you expand on the topic and ideas. :)


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