River of my tears

August 11, 2012
By MinaDeOro SILVER, Bell Gardens, California
MinaDeOro SILVER, Bell Gardens, California
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Favorite Quote:
"My best friend gave me the best advice. He said, "Each day's a gift and not a given right. Leave no stone upturned. Leave your fears behind and try to take the path less traveled by. That first step you take is the longest stride"


Set in motion they start to cry
Gulp by gulp tear by tear
They show no fear
Even though it gets to me as quick as woop!
Holding in something I just can’t hide
Sooner or later you’ll hear
Sniff, sniff, sniff, sniff.



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on Aug. 16 2012 at 11:53 pm
MinaDeOro SILVER, Bell Gardens, California
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My best friend gave me the best advice. He said, "Each day's a gift and not a given right. Leave no stone upturned. Leave your fears behind and try to take the path less traveled by. That first step you take is the longest stride"

okay i will work on that :)

Meonly BRONZE said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 11:34 pm
Meonly BRONZE, Granite Falls, Minnesota
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I like the idea of this but i see no emotion in it... and just keep in mind I'm a little new at writing poerty myself.




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