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River of my tears

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Set in motion they start to cry
Gulp by gulp tear by tear
They show no fear
Even though it gets to me as quick as woop!
Holding in something I just can’t hide
Sooner or later you’ll hear
Sniff, sniff, sniff, sniff.




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MinaDeOro said...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 11:53 pm:
okay i will work on that :)
 
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MeonlyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 11:34 pm:
I like the idea of this but i see no emotion in it... and just keep in mind I'm a little new at writing poerty myself.
 
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