Take It Away; Stars

July 14, 2012
By Anonymous

I sit back and gaze upon the dark night sky. My eyes are scanning...searching.
Where are the beautiful glistening stars that shine and makes me smile? That makes my heart dance with joy?
And makes my mind wonder in awe?
Come! Take away this glooming....depressing, darkness! And fill it with twinkling bright stars.



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on Mar. 12 2013 at 9:57 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

nice :) it was really simple but pretty :) 

on Nov. 6 2012 at 4:51 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thanks! I Cameron, I know you couldnt have its a"one-of-a-kind" (:

on Nov. 6 2012 at 4:49 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thanks very much!

on Nov. 3 2012 at 4:15 pm
Remember_Me_Well BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
My love for you is bulletproof, but you're the one who shot me.


















-Pierce the Veil (Bulletproof Love)

i couldnt have written it better :D

on Nov. 3 2012 at 4:13 pm
I absolutely Love it!!! Great Job...no Really!!:)

on Oct. 31 2012 at 5:32 am
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thank you (:

on Oct. 29 2012 at 8:36 pm
casperwatson PLATINUM, West Hartford, Connecticut
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I love it!! You have such great talent!

on Aug. 9 2012 at 12:04 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

FWI: I accidently clicked "anonymous" but this poem is written by me. Hope you like it. Thanks.

on Aug. 8 2012 at 6:54 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

dandelions? lol, me too! i still do some times. i feel like what i wish with those flowers should be really significant, since it might come true, but i immediately feel foolish after its gone, like, um, did anyone see me do that? haha its still fun though.

on Aug. 3 2012 at 1:01 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Cool! Thank ya much!

on Aug. 3 2012 at 12:21 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

AWWW ! I like it, it almost sounds sweet in a way, but has emotion into it as well.

on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:40 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thanks!  

 


on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:10 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thank ya much Nak!!

on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:51 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

Nice. Short n' Sweet, with an interesting concept. Liked it.

on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:50 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thank you! 

on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:49 pm
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

Awesome as always Purple!

on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:14 pm
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can't live without."

"Always stand up for what's right even if that means you're standing alone."

A short, sweet and adorable poem, nice job! :)

on Aug. 2 2012 at 4:03 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thank ya!

About ur Poem: Like it!! Simple but a lot of meaning and I like the pic. Fits nicely with your poem. When I was little I would wish with the Wish Flowers(what I used to call em) :)


on Aug. 2 2012 at 3:54 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
30 articles 11 photos 193 comments

Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

pretty! i love writing about stars. speaking of which, i give this poem 5 of them. :) care to look at my poem, You and Your Wish? short, and about wishing on a star. 


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