Take It Away; Stars

By , Macomb, MI
I sit back and gaze upon the dark night sky. My eyes are scanning...searching.
Where are the beautiful glistening stars that shine and makes me smile? That makes my heart dance with joy?
And makes my mind wonder in awe?
Come! Take away this glooming....depressing, darkness! And fill it with twinkling bright stars.





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AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12, 2013 at 9:57 am
nice :) it was really simple but pretty :) 
 
remember_me_well said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 4:15 pm
i couldnt have written it better :D
 
PurpleOreoImpossible replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 4:51 pm
Thanks! I Cameron, I know you couldnt have its a"one-of-a-kind" (:
 
Eclipse-of-the-Heart said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 4:13 pm
I absolutely Love it!!! Great Job...no Really!!:)
 
PurpleOreoImpossible replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 4:49 pm
Thanks very much!
 
Care_Btvs said...
Oct. 29, 2012 at 8:36 pm
I love it!! You have such great talent!
 
PurpleOreo replied...
Oct. 31, 2012 at 5:32 am
Thank you (:
 
Blessings said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 12:04 pm
FWI: I accidently clicked "anonymous" but this poem is written by me. Hope you like it. Thanks.
 
TheHangingGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 12:21 pm
AWWW ! I like it, it almost sounds sweet in a way, but has emotion into it as well.
 
PurpleTesoro replied...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 1:01 pm
Cool! Thank ya much!
 
Sidewinder This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 6:51 pm
Nice. Short n' Sweet, with an interesting concept. Liked it.
 
PurpleTesoro replied...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 7:40 pm

Thanks!  

 

 
nakubara This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 6:49 pm
Awesome as always Purple!
 
PurpleTesoro replied...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 7:10 pm
Thank ya much Nak!!
 
Allicat001 said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 6:14 pm
A short, sweet and adorable poem, nice job! :)
 
PurpleTesoro replied...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 6:50 pm
Thank you! 
 
Kestrel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 3:54 pm
pretty! i love writing about stars. speaking of which, i give this poem 5 of them. :) care to look at my poem, You and Your Wish? short, and about wishing on a star. 
 
PurpleTesoro replied...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 4:03 pm

Thank ya!

About ur Poem: Like it!! Simple but a lot of meaning and I like the pic. Fits nicely with your poem. When I was little I would wish with the Wish Flowers(what I used to call em) :)

 
Kestrel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 8, 2012 at 6:54 pm
dandelions? lol, me too! i still do some times. i feel like what i wish with those flowers should be really significant, since it might come true, but i immediately feel foolish after its gone, like, um, did anyone see me do that? haha its still fun though.
 
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