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Take It Away; Stars

July 14, 2012
By Anonymous

I sit back and gaze upon the dark night sky. My eyes are scanning...searching.
Where are the beautiful glistening stars that shine and makes me smile? That makes my heart dance with joy?
And makes my mind wonder in awe?
Come! Take away this glooming....depressing, darkness! And fill it with twinkling bright stars.

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AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 12 2013 at 9:57 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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nice :) it was really simple but pretty :) 
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2012 at 4:51 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
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Thanks! I Cameron, I know you couldnt have its a"one-of-a-kind" (:
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2012 at 4:49 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

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Thanks very much!
Remember_Me_Well BRONZE said...
on Nov. 3 2012 at 4:15 pm
Remember_Me_Well BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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i couldnt have written it better :D
Eclipse-of-the-Heart said...
on Nov. 3 2012 at 4:13 pm
I absolutely Love it!!! Great Job...no Really!!:)
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2012 at 5:32 am
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
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Thank you (:
casperwatson PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2012 at 8:36 pm
casperwatson PLATINUM, West Hartford, Connecticut
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I love it!! You have such great talent!
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 12:04 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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FWI: I accidently clicked "anonymous" but this poem is written by me. Hope you like it. Thanks.
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 8 2012 at 6:54 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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dandelions? lol, me too! i still do some times. i feel like what i wish with those flowers should be really significant, since it might come true, but i immediately feel foolish after its gone, like, um, did anyone see me do that? haha its still fun though.
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2012 at 1:01 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Cool! Thank ya much!
TheHangingGirl BRONZE said...
on Aug. 3 2012 at 12:21 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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AWWW ! I like it, it almost sounds sweet in a way, but has emotion into it as well.
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:40 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
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Thanks!  

 

PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:10 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Thank ya much Nak!!
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:51 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Nice. Short n' Sweet, with an interesting concept. Liked it.
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:50 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
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Thank you! 
nakubara PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:49 pm
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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Awesome as always Purple!
Allicat001 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:14 pm
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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A short, sweet and adorable poem, nice job! :)
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 4:03 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

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Thank ya!

About ur Poem: Like it!! Simple but a lot of meaning and I like the pic. Fits nicely with your poem. When I was little I would wish with the Wish Flowers(what I used to call em) :)

Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 3:54 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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pretty! i love writing about stars. speaking of which, i give this poem 5 of them. :) care to look at my poem, You and Your Wish? short, and about wishing on a star.