Weeping Together

July 28, 2012
By dreamingcharlie BRONZE, Eau Claire, Wisconsin
dreamingcharlie BRONZE, Eau Claire, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"For the present is the point at which time touches Eternity." C.S. Lewis, "The Screwtape Letters"

Daddy once told me
that weeping willows caused pain
and sadness
and everything bad.
That they were why people cried
and why people hated
and why hearts were broken.
Today I want to destroy the willows.
I will burn and cut and kill them all.
Just to stop the tears in my eyes
and the words of hatred in my ears
and the pain of my aching heart.
I want to destroy them all for making me hurt for no reason at all.
But Daddy never knew the most important part of all.
The willows share our pain.
They share our broken hearts
and the words of hatred in our ears
and the tears running down our faces.
They take the pain and the hurt
and turn it into something bearable.
That’s why they weep, Daddy.
So instead I will sit beneath the willows
and take back some of the pain that they stole.
Daddy, the willows and I will weep together.

The author's comments:
Normally, I really dislike writing poems, except under very rare circumstances. In this case, the moon was full and bright, and I was in a particularly bad mood. However, by the time I wrote the last word, my mood had calmed, and I was impressed with this piece.

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