Snowflakes

July 27, 2012
By ccascq BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
ccascq BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
3 articles 10 photos 22 comments

They glisten, they glow,
They put on a show.

Snowflakes are cold,
With a touch of white gold.

They make a superb sight
Of wintry white.

To capture a Snowflake
patience it will take

Men try again and again
until finally they WIN.


The author's comments:
Snowflakes are One-Of-A-Kind! Each snowflake is different in some amazing way! Just imagine the words snowflakes, glisten, glow, white, wonder and white gold!

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ccascq BRONZE said...
on Aug. 17 2012 at 6:59 pm
ccascq BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
3 articles 10 photos 22 comments
Thank you, all information is great

on Aug. 11 2012 at 1:57 pm
Mashley310 BRONZE, Rowlett, Texas
2 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They always forget the last part of that saying: curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back" its something to that effect anyway." - Tamora Pierce

Good job! This poem is cute and fun. I really liked your choice of topic (it wan't your typical love poem, or a poem about a lack of love). The rhythm is a bit hard to grasp though (a couple of lines didn't really seem to fit rhythmically (lines 4&5)), and the rhyme was forced a couple of times (stanza 4, especially). Overall, good job!


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