July 27, 2012
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They glisten, they glow,
They put on a show.

Snowflakes are cold,
With a touch of white gold.

They make a superb sight
Of wintry white.

To capture a Snowflake
patience it will take

Men try again and again
until finally they WIN.

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Mashley310 said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 1:57 pm
Good job! This poem is cute and fun. I really liked your choice of topic (it wan't your typical love poem, or a poem about a lack of love). The rhythm is a bit hard to grasp though (a couple of lines didn't really seem to fit rhythmically (lines 4&5)), and the rhyme was forced a couple of times (stanza 4, especially). Overall, good job!
ccascq replied...
Aug. 17, 2012 at 6:59 pm
Thank you, all information is great
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